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Edit: Thanks guys!! It really helped me. :) I am halfway done now so I don't need anymore opinions, if you want to of course still you are allowed to, but I probably won't be changing much now. I really appreciate the help!!

I need help arghhhh... So I need to do this assignment for tomorrow (I am good at procrastinating) and I have boiled it down to these three ideas! But I am not sure which one to do... Obviously these are very rough.

Which one says "Perfectionist" most to you? Do any of the make sense? Tell me what you think and why you think it, how do you interpret it?

1st one: I am probably going to use more like the composition on the bottom where the main bird in the foreground is larger.

2nd one: I am having trouble because it looks like the orb thing... you can't tell if they are eating it or spitting it up. I want it to look like they are spitting it up, how could I do that?? :(

3rd one: No comments for this one I don't think.


Please let me know what you think!! :( I am a terrible student.
Image size
700x2914px 2.62 MB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
SP510UZ
Shutter Speed
10/150 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
125
Date Taken
Oct 13, 2010, 4:29:04 PM
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elviella's avatar
Aah, these all look very interesting! Pity I wasn't in time to give you an actually helpful opinion. Anyway! I like them all, they all have something interesting to tell. :) It's always nice to see people's project sketches. :3