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'The Perfectionist' Sketches by bumble-boo 'The Perfectionist' Sketches by bumble-boo
Edit: Thanks guys!! It really helped me. :) I am halfway done now so I don't need anymore opinions, if you want to of course still you are allowed to, but I probably won't be changing much now. I really appreciate the help!!

I need help arghhhh... So I need to do this assignment for tomorrow (I am good at procrastinating) and I have boiled it down to these three ideas! But I am not sure which one to do... Obviously these are very rough.

Which one says "Perfectionist" most to you? Do any of the make sense? Tell me what you think and why you think it, how do you interpret it?

1st one: I am probably going to use more like the composition on the bottom where the main bird in the foreground is larger.

2nd one: I am having trouble because it looks like the orb thing... you can't tell if they are eating it or spitting it up. I want it to look like they are spitting it up, how could I do that?? :(

3rd one: No comments for this one I don't think.


Please let me know what you think!! :( I am a terrible student.
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elviella Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010
Aah, these all look very interesting! Pity I wasn't in time to give you an actually helpful opinion. Anyway! I like them all, they all have something interesting to tell. :) It's always nice to see people's project sketches. :3
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bumble-boo Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2010  Student Artist
Thank you very much! :)
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Arkeyana Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Student General Artist
ohwow I love seeing the concept sketches of projects x)
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bumble-boo Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Student Artist
Haha they are sooo messssyyy!
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Arkeyana Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Student General Artist
lol well, rough concept sketches can be like that x)
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bumble-boo Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Student Artist
Hahaha it's true that's how they are!
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Arkeyana Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Student General Artist
:D
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Aconitum-Napellus Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Professional Writer
It's really interesting seeing your WIPs - like a passive tutorial :D
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bumble-boo Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2010  Student Artist
I'm glad to hear that! :)
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Nariagari Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
I like #2 I guess to make it to make it look more like the orbs are coming from the person make sure the other orbs that are already out are in a pattern that would make sense if they had just come out of the person.
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